<p>For prompt #1, the world that has shaped you - I talk about how my family takes in exchange students, how this pushes me to become a more outgoing person, and the cultural experience (we have taken Chinese and Japanese students, and the whole process is relatively new to me, so it's all fresh in my mind). </p>
<p>For prompt #2, interpreting it as an experience that has shaped me - How I got a C in my AP physics class (1st semester at least)--my first C in the course of my life--and how I now understand the perspective of students who simply can't grasp subjects and the value of hard work. </p>
<p>I'm just very worried about my second essay because I'm afraid people will interpret it as me trying to explain my C (which truly isn't that bad of a grade). My entire point is to relate how something so normal to many others baffled me and helped me to appreciate the talents I have and to value studying/determination. </p>
<p>As you may notice the approaching deadline, quick answers would be lovely... But I don't want anyone to feel obligated to make an essay to validate/criticise my topics. A consise answer is great too. All of your thoughts and help is very, very appreciated! :)</p>
I really appreciate your feedback. I suppose I’m coming across as, as I was at the time, baffled/distraught (though much less so in the essay) about getting a bad grade, and then more matter-of-fact with the whole “talent only takes you so far” and value of perspective thing. My diction probably reflects this as well; I love rhetorical questions and dashes when I can use them.</p>
I’ll try to find it, though I’m new to this site… If I can’t find it, maybe a link, haha? :)</p>