<p>Applying to: Claremont McKenna, Pitzer, USC, Boston College, Boston University, George Washington University, Loyola Marymount, NYU</p>
<p>Looking to have someone proofread my essay on if the content is "good" or if I it's just "all bad." Please note any sentences that sound weird and how you would suggest to fix them, or anything that seems unclear. Also a rating out of 10 would be nice at the end so I know where I stand.</p>
<p>Thanks a lot, and no 2013'ers please.</p>
<p>i would love to read
not applying to any of these colleges</p>
<p>yeah, i’d love to read it too.</p>
<p>Why don’t you want college freshmen looking over your essay?</p>
<p>Anyway I am a HS senior, but have never remotely considered applying to any of those schools. If you want I can read over it (PM).</p>
<p>My bad I meant 2,014 because I don’t really want people applying to colleges to give their opinions which don’t really hold much weight since none of us have gone through the college application process before.</p>
<p>thanks a lot for the feedback Bryan, anyone else?</p>
<p>I would be happy to look it over for you, though I am a NYU CAS applicant also.</p>