On a good track with the essay?

College Essays
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<p>I'm writing my first essay for Common App, and I was wondering if any of you guys wanted to read what I have so far and tell me if it's too cliche, boring, or if I need to change the topic all together?
Thanks!
It's for Cornell by the way. ED
Go big red! haha</p>

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<p>sure, pm me</p>

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<p>thanks! :D</p>

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<p>Absolutely, I would love to read it. I got good help for mine, so I should be able to give some helpful advice. PM me.</p>

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<p>me too! :) i'll be brutally honest</p>

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<p>thanks you guys!
sent you what i have right now. :]</p>

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<p>Feel free. =] I'm here!</p>

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<p>I'll send it to ya!</p>

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<p>pm me ill give it a look</p>

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<p>I'll read if you'd like</p>

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<p>I'll will read it if you want. Parent of Soph college student</p>

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<p>sent :] Thanks!</p>

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<p>sure be glad to help! pm me!</p>

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<p>I would be glad to help too...particularly since I'm going to Cornell this fall...and got in ED.
so now you're like me but last year...lol.</p>

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<p>I'll check it out. Currently a rising college junior.</p>

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<p>I'd love to read it. PM me! :-)</p>