<p>I was wondering if anyone would like to share their sucessful personal statements to help aspiring transfers get a feel for what a good essay reads like.</p>
<p>I am particularly interested in reading essays from anyone who got into cal and la.</p>
<p>I just submitted my application. I'm already nervous.</p>
<p>Damn you turned in your apps really early! Good stuff! Now you don't have to stress out over personal statements and what not... =]</p>
<p>why did you guys submit your app so early? what if you decide to change something!</p>
<p>I've already looked over my app and reedited my personal statement dozen of times. If I end up wanting to change something, I'll do it in December when I have to change my grades.</p>