On the third draft of my Essay for Princeton, Rice, and Emory..and NEED HELP!!!!

<p>Hey guys,</p>

<p>Title kinda says it all. I have been trying to improve my essay for a while now and think it getting ok...but I could really use the advice of some people on this forum to see how it can still improve. Just post below and I'll pm you!</p>

<p>Thanks,
Robbie</p>

<p>Robbie,
I’d love to help you out. Just please, please include the prompts.</p>

<p>You can PM me with the prompts if you want another opinion. Also, what kinda things do you think you’re having trouble with? If you’ve been trying to improve it for a while it sounds like you’ve got writers block</p>

<p>I’ll try and help where I can! =)</p>