one last look at my essay before i send it off ...

College Essays
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<p>hi guys!</p>

<p>some of you may have read my essay already, but before i send it off in 4 days i want it to be perfect so if any of you can look it over, that would be great! I am also looking for criticism and that sort. </p>

<p>Post here and i'll PM it to you. i want detail criticism/suggestions not merely one sentence of "its good". </p>

<p>thanks!</p>

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<p>me. me. read mine?</p>

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<p>anybody else?</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>ill read, pm me</p>

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<p>Bump. Helppppppppp</p>

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<p>I'll read it
!</p>

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<p>pm it over</p>

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<p>send it on over...</p>

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<p>go ahead and i'll take a look. pm it over</p>

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<p>send it fo rme , you will have feedback after 3 hours</p>

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<p>pm over........</p>

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<p>sure, Ill take a look at it. PM me</p>