<p>I'm an international student and I am not secure about my college essay.
Can anyone please read it and give me advice????? I really need some help!</p>
<p>PM it to me</p>
<p>I’ll do it if you read mine as well</p>
<p>wait, I’m having trouble doing it… it says I don’t have enough posts. Can I PM it later to you?</p>
<p>I just received it.
The essay overall is good, but the last paragraph feels disconnected.
Try to emphasize what in your experience made you become who you are today.</p>
<p>hope I helped, good luck!</p>
<p>Thank you for your help.
I’m going to make the changes…</p>
<p>Do you want to send yours so I can read it?</p>
<p>I don’t have enough posts yet… but I’ll send it later</p>
<p>ooh ok! just PM me anytime you want</p>