OPINIONS needed for common app 'additional info'

<p>Hi everyone,
I'm struggling with my 'additional info' section of the Common Application. I'm writing about my extraneous circumstances during eleventh grade and how it affected my grades. If anyone would be so kind as to proofread over this, even give me some feedback, I would be so grateful. </p>

<p>Please message me so that I can send it your way,
Thanks!</p>

<p>I would really appreciate help :slight_smile: I would also be glad to look over your essays if you’re interested.
Thanks!</p>