Opinions of my essay?

Applying to College
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<p>I just finished the "topic of my choice" essay I'm using for the Common App and any other topic where it'll fit. I just want some people to read through it and give me some feedback before I go and click that scary "SUBMIT!" button haha.
So just comment here and I'll PM a copy of it to you.
Thanks in advance!!</p>

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<p>pm it to me</p>

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<p>I'll give it a read.</p>

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<p>ill read it....</p>

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<p>I can read it over for you!</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>i'll give feedback</p>

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<p>So will I.</p>

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<p>ill read too!</p>

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<p>I'll offer some feedback.</p>

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<p>oh no! oh yes, i will read your essay :)</p>

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<p>I'll read it for you.</p>

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<p>i'll read it...</p>

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<p>i'll comment too!</p>

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<p>Hello. I'll have a read</p>