Optional Essay Critique

<p>If anybody would be willing to take a look at my optional essay, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks :)</p>

<p>I’m a '14 but I was accepted EA. I’m currently the only one in my area on Christmas Break so I’m really bored. I’d be glad to read it. :)</p>

<p>Yeah, PM it to me, i’ll be glad to read it (I was admitted EA, btw, so i have nothing better to do =)</p>

<p>Sure I would love to =)</p>

<p>I was accepted EA and would be glad to read it. Just PM me.</p>