Parent willing to read my CommonApp essay? Got rejected ED, reason why?

<p>Are there any knowledgeable parents out there that are willing to read my commonapp essay? </p>

<p>I got rejected from my ED school (Cornell) and am wondering if the essay could have been a reason why. I would need to tweak it before I send in my RD apps (which I will be doing today or tomorrow).</p>

<p>Just post here and I'll PM it to you! Thanks!</p>

<p>PM it to me.</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>Sure I could read</p>