Parents, I need your help

<p>I just wrote my short-answer for the Common Application on a topic that could potentially come across as very trivial (cheerleading). I need some opinions on it from adults who don't know me (as close as I can get to the perspective of admissions officers.) Would any parents be willing to help? It's short- only about 200 words. I would really appreciate it :)</p>

<p>You can PM me. Please include your email address and let me know what schools you are considering.</p>

<p>jmmom- Your comments were so helpful. Thank you for the detailed response!</p>

<p>Anybody else?</p>

<p>I'm willing to help.</p>

<p>Thanks to everybody who has helped so far!</p>