<p>Would anybody be willing to read an essay of mine? I've gotten it read by my parents and close friends and I'm getting mixed reviews, 50/50. I was actually given the option of trashing it or editing it, but I'm afraid that if I do edit, that I'll lose that "voice" or "touch." And I get the idea that what "if" I do use this essay and the admissions officers don't like it and its the sole reason that I get rejected at the colleges I want to go to... I really don't know what to do...And I'm kind of new at this essay reading thing, so please be honest guys...thanks ><</p>
<p>I'll read it. PM away.</p>
<p>oh thank you! i'll...PM it..</p>
<p>what's the topic? I'll read, PM me</p>