<p>"Its been my dream since I was a little girl and did a play with my chuch youth group.Yes i want to go to columbia, I work hard but sometimes i think to myself is it hopless.but you know I'm never giving up.read my post how much harder do i have to work.i sleep at 3am in morning everynight...then you will understand how life for me is..."</p>
<p>Here is a copyedited version. I am not doing this to be mean or to embarass you. I am doing this so that you are able to improve your writing. This is what your teachers should be doing.</p>
<p>It has (note: "Its" is the possessive of "it") been my dream since I was a little girl and did a play with my church youth group. Yes, (comma inserted) I want to go to Columbia. (period inserted) I work hard, (comma inserted) but sometimes i think to myself is it hopeless (spelling corrected), (period changed to comma) but (deleted "you know," which is too informal) I'm never giving up. Read my post, (comma inserted) "How much harder do i have to work." Note that the quotes were inserted since that was a title.</p>
<p>i sleep at 3am in morning everynight. Edited is I go to sleep at 3 a.m. every night or I go to sleep at 3 in the morning every night.</p>