<p>Anyone willing to read my main essay for the Common App and give feedback?</p>
<p>I would prefer people who are not in the Class of 2010 (or younger) and who have grammatical expertise to help me trim it down a bit.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>PM me your essay and I will offer you some feedback</p>
<p>I’d be glad to read your essay; I’m in college, so I have nothing else to do 
PM it or email it over at <a href="mailto:bleucrimson@yahoo.com">bleucrimson@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>yea i’ll gladly read over it pm it</p>