<p>I really, really, really, need critique for my Common Application personal essay.</p>
<p>Any type of feedback will be GREATLY appreciated thanks! :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it if it’s not your first draft 
PM it or email it over at <a href="mailto:bleucrimson@yahoo.com">bleucrimson@yahoo.com</a> I’m in college and it’s summer so I really have nothing else to do right now :)</p>
<p>pm it - i’ll take a look</p>
<p>PM me, but i am 2014 so use your own discretion.</p>
<p>bumpbump!!</p>
<p>same here.</p>
<p>Pm it over :)</p>
<p>I can take a look and critique if you still need readers. PM it over.</p>
<p>I graduated (class of 13’) so if you want I’ll read it =)</p>
<p>PM me your essay if you need additional feedback</p>
<p>PM me if you want suggestions. :)</p>
<p>pm if you need another opinion</p>
<p>Yeah, you can send me the essay too if you need another opinion</p>
<p>I’m class of 2010. If you are okay with me reading it (I’ve just finished mine), I’d be happy to.</p>
<p>College soph in here. you can send it to me, no risk.</p>
<p>PM me! Class of 2010 as well though. I finished my first draft a couple of days ago so I’m fairly fresh with the thought processes!</p>
<p>edited; any takers? please and thank you! :)</p>
<p>sure. you can PM me. :)</p>
<p>i can help</p>
<p>BUMP! I think this draft is it. Please, please, please glance it over if you have the time.</p>
<p>You (hopefully) won’t be disappointed - I (sort of) promise! :D</p>