<p>I like my essay! Strangely enough. Hence, am in dire need of criticism to burst the bubble!
Honestly, though, help will be appreciated.
(Common App, personal essay)</p>
<p>I would greatly appreciate any advice… Am an internatinal, so was wondering if essay is too frivolous.</p>
<p>Anyone there?</p>
<p>i’ll take a look at it tonight if you want–</p>
<p>email it as an attachment. <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>Thanks! Anyone else?</p>