<p>Hi, I'm communication / media studies major, and I'm applying uc Berkeley and Davis this year.
I'm wondering if there are anyone who got accepted into UCs can let me read their personal statement / essays?
You could post on here or send me a pm?? I've read a friend's personal essay who is the same major as me and got accepted to Berkeley, she wrote about the chinese philosopher has taught her and the influences in life...
I would just want to see what do you guys mostly write about to include in your essay... like the concepts and philosophical quotations ...! Please anyone let me read yours! </p>
<p>I think the “operative” word here is “personal”. Some people have written about deeply personal feelings that affected their choices and they might be uncomfortable sharing that info, even in a pm.</p>
<p>My daughter got in, but I know she wouldn’t share her essay.</p>
<p>It’s understandable, for some people that they wouldn’t share their essay to other people.
I’m just looking to see if anyone would like to share to help me get an idea what a great admission essay can be like, since i’ve seen people sharing their essays to get helpful tips and feedback, which is what i will do on here when i’m having my rough draft and finished editing it!</p>