<p>I was hoping a few people could read through my first draft of my common app main essay.</p>
<p>It's 1,800 words, approximately, which, yes is long, but as a transfer applicant I needed to get things off my chest, and I think I did it well.</p>
<p>If you see any grammar flubs feel free to bring them to my attention, etc. </p>
<p>The entire essay won't fit in a private message, so I'd send you a file through megaupload. If you're feeling wary, you could scan it for viruses. Thanks if you're interested :).</p>
<p>Also, I'm applying as a transfer from Texas A&M to Stanford, Brown, Harvard and Yale :).</p>
<p>sure I can revise your essay. Email me at jaypatel2468*********** with a deadline so I can help before it’s too late.</p>
<p>Your e-mail doesn’t show up, and I don’t mean to be rude, but I’m looking for more credible people in CC.</p>
<p>It automatically blanked out. My email is followed by ***********. I am a junior in college and majoring in English Language and Literature.</p>
<p>It is blanked out again. My email is followed by yahoo.com</p>
<p>Still looking for a few readers :)</p>
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<p>Thanks psiovana. Taking more readers :).</p>
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<p>I’ll look over our essay if you look over mine. I want to transfer as well.</p>
<p>I’ve been loving the critique and have been editing as such. The more readers the merrier :).</p>
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<p>I never got a chance, but I hope those other readers helped, davidlaboza.</p>