Personal Essay Issue

<p>How do I address the fact that I missed 28 days of school sophomore year and it effected my grades without sounding like I am making excuses or whining?</p>

<p>Probably not in the essay. Ask your counselor to explain or use additional info.</p>

<p>I was going to address it in the “Additional Information” essay and also discuss some other personal problems, would this be okay or would it just sound like whining</p>

<p>I would be very careful about discussing personal problems. Bottom line–most schools won’t excuse bad grades for any problem so think about what you’re writing and consult your counselor.</p>

<p>hmm alright, it was about missing 28 days of school (sickness resulting in surgery) resulting in low grades sophomore year</p>

<p>Ask your counselor note it in the school report and you should note that in additional info. If everything else is stellar that’s a reasonable excuse for a little weakness.</p>

<p>ya freshmen gpa 4.0 sophomore 3.56 junior 4.0 lol, thank you for the help!</p>

<p>I wouldn’t say something like that in an essay</p>

<p>Nice rebound, you obviously recovered quite well! ;D</p>

<p>carlnator: why do you say that, not trying to challenge you rather to pick up other viewpoints…
I asked my counselor she suggested that if it had a clear impact I should address but the key is HOW i present it, she’s gonna read over it</p>

<p>Just be direct and honest. “My sophomore grades dipped due to a serious illness and surgery that required that I miss 28 days of school that semester. I can address in more detail, if needed.”</p>

<p>ohh I like that idea, so the “additional info” dosen’t have to be an essay</p>

<p>it was actually lingering sinus infections due to inflamed adanoids, didn’t make a full week of school all first semester</p>

<p>also I think it could fall under “over coming adversity” atleast I know the personal issues can</p>