Hi!
The title says it all.
I wrote this essay that is still under the limits of common app response (600 words), but I feel like maybe something is missing…And I’ve read it so many times that it’s all starting to blur together… I did take a break too, but I’d prefer another set of eyes to look it over. I like my essay…but I feel like some parts could be better…I’m considering making those changes, but I run the risk of going over the limit for words.
Please respond if you are willing to look it over. I will PM essay.
My aunt is a Professor for creative writing at a Uni in my area. If you PM it to me I can have her look over it for me and give you the notes. I had her look over mine and she gave some really good advice.!
@plshelpme11 You’re a tad bit late. I already submitted my essays to all of the schools to which I’m applying.
It’s alright though. A very good friend of mine looked it over for me and gave me her opinions.
I’d love to. I like to think I’m quite talented with writing and I’d love to see how app essays work. I also have some teachers if you’d like me to show them.