Personal Experience Essays (Two)

<p>I wrote essays each containing experiences that impacted my life. One I will use for Common App and other for other non-common app colleges. Would anyone take a look at these essays and give me feedback please? One is about 500 words and another about 650 words.</p>

<p>I can help edit either one or both of them. But be forewarned, I'm pretty frank when it comes to editing</p>

<p>i'll read em for ya, pm em over.</p>

<p>i'll read em if you dont mind?</p>

<p>=D</p>

<p>Ill read them for you if you want :)</p>

<p>I'll give it my best. PM me</p>

<p>I'll critique it, too. PM me.</p>