Personal Statement and Short Answer critique

<p>Hello,
I've just finished drafts of my Personal Statement and Short Answer for the Common App, and was wondering if a few people would be willing to critique them. Topics are chess and public speaking.</p>

<p>Post here or PM if you have time to read them, it would be much appreciated.</p>

<p>I’ll be happy to read either or both and give some feedback. Please PM them to me.</p>

<p>I am willing to read too.</p>

<p>I’ll read if you’d like. PM away.</p>

<p>I would love to read them if you want! PM me</p>

<p>PM meeeeeee</p>

<p>Alright, I’ve sent them to six people now, which should be enough. Thanks to everyone who offered to read them, particularly ACTTester, who sent me a helpful and specific critique of both essays. Two thumbs up. :)</p>

<p>(I haven’t gotten replies from most of the other readers yet, so I can’t give feedback on them.)</p>

<p>hey, i’d really like to read it!</p>

<p>pm me?</p>

<p>i want to read it too and give helpful comments</p>