Personal Statement Essay

<p>I'm writing my personal statement and I'd like some reviews from other people. What is a good website to post on for essay reviews?</p>

<p>Anyone who is willing to read my essay and peer-edit or criticize, please post and I'll PM it to you! Thank you so much.</p>

<p>I’ll take a read.</p>

<p>I’ll take a read</p>

<p>Don’t post your essays anywhere publicly; you risk being plagiarized. PMing it to a few… people would be a better idea. You’d also get a better response if you posted this in the Essay section of this forum. </p>

<p>But anyway, I’ll read it if you’d like.</p>

<p>I agree with Kali, it’s best if you don’t post it, and if you need someone else to comment on your essay, feel free to Pm me and I’d gladly take a look at it :)</p>

<p>Thanks guys! Please be meaner and give me honest opinions. I’m open to any wide sweeping revisions as well.</p>

<p>glad to review!</p>

<p>I can take a look. What schools are you applying to?</p>

<p>i can take a look for you</p>

<p>I’ll read it! :)</p>

<p>I think I will apply to Harvard EA, since they’re supplement seems the shortest =). I’m very scared of getting rejected and “wasting” my early action chance though…If I find a perfect match, I will apply to that one instead!</p>

<p>Thanks for the offers guys! I’m currently unhappy with my first draft and I’ve hit a stumbling block. I will send it to you within a few days. Friday at the latest. Gotta set myself deadlines.</p>

<p>If you are applying to Harvard, why have hs kids read it? What do they know about a successful personal statement? Just saying.</p>

<p>Well, we can still recognize good writing, even if other high schoolers can’t help me write the perfect essay. I think it’s still pretty useful feedback to see what other people think</p>

<p>Edit: I think/hope we can recognize good writing in general. Not meaning in any way that my writing is good.</p>

<p>i can help</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you need some feedback from another pair of eyes!</p>

<p>Sure, I’d like to help</p>

<p>I got into Harvard (but I’m going to Stanford)…I can look at it.</p>

<p>I can take a look!</p>

<p>I’d be happy to help, maybe you could take a look at mine as well?</p>

<p>Thanks for the offers everyone!</p>

<p>Unfortunately, I now dislike my first topic passionately. I must needs work on writing something that I like before I send it to all of these (wonderful nice generous smart) peer editors.</p>