<p>I just finished the rough draft of one of the personal statment essays for the UC application and I really need feedback on if it is good/how I could improve it and spelling/grammar. It's really personal so I don't feel comfortable having people I have to see everyday read it, anyone willing to read it and help me? It's reeeallly important to me[:</p>
<p>I’ll try and help out. PM it over.</p>
<p>ill take a look at it</p>
<p>I can take look for you. PM it to me if you still need help.</p>
<p>I can help too. PM.</p>
<p>Ill take a look, PM if you still need someone to read it.</p>
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<li>Best of Luck</li>
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<p>I’ll read it.</p>