Personal Statement for Yale - HELP

Hey guys! I hope you guys are enjoying your new year. I am really on a time crunch on my college apps.

Would anyone be willing to read my personal statement essay and provide me with any feedback?

Anything would be appreciated! :slight_smile:

Thank you guys .

Please comment your email so I can send you my essay.

You can private message your essay to me, but I may or may not have time to read it before the deadline.

I’ll be willing to help out but I don’t think I’ll be giving any grammatical critiques, just general ones.

Thank you so much !

Thank you as well !

You could send it to me if you want.

Thank you so much !