<p>I am finishing up my personal statement and am having some issues with it. I was told that it was one of the best written personal statements by a BGO, but it may be somewhat offensive towards people who read it to fast.</p>
<p>I want to get some input on it, if anyone is willing please PM me.</p>
<p>My suggestion is to have people that do not know you read your essay- pass it around to teachers at school, to people at your parents work- but people that do not know you. Ask them to read it, but more importantly, ask them this question:</p>
<p>"please describe your impression of the person that wrote this essay."</p>
<p>THAT is what you need to drill down to, and work from.<br>
If you want, I will give it a whirl- and return an honest opinion.
Best of luck!</p>