Personal Statement Last Revision Help?

Transfer Students UC Transfers
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<p>Hey guys! Sorry to make a new thread, I had my PS read by a few people yesterday and took input from the lot of them. So i've changed my PS a bit. I was wondering if anyone would last minute edit and check for grammar/punctuation issues! It would be of an enormous help.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>i sent you a pm. would you or anyone else be willing to exchange/read my essay as well?</p>

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<p>i will exchange and read someones. I only can read one essay prompt, so in turn I will only give one essay prompt.</p>