<p>Will any of you parents read my personal statement? It's about a risk I took concerning underage drinking. I'm kind of worried about coming off as "I'm so much better than my peers" when I don't mean to come off like that. I guess I just realllly need a second opinion. If you would be interested in reading it please either respond or PM me? I'd be very grateful. </p>
<p>Oh, and... it's about 670 words which means I have to cut it by about 100. If you're a good editor of any kind that would be of much help as well. Thanks.</p>