Personal Statement

<p>What the heck do you write in these things? I've been looking at a blank sheet for hours.. I'm so confused. Can anyone give me some examples or a formula?</p>

<p>Com’on guys :(</p>

<p>I’ve wondered about this too. Especially about whether you’re supposed to be formal or creative.</p>

<p>It’s hard. There’s this book by the PR that has I think 500 essays that worked. It really helped me get a sense of what I should write about.</p>

<p>they actually told me it has to be less than 700 words and contain all the information in the checkbox. PLUS BE CREATIVE.</p>

<p>Any ideas?</p>

<p>For most places, the word limit is 250-500. Just get that book I was talking about. It’ll give you a better idea of what they’re looking for. It’s available at most libraries too. Most schools give you the option of a topic of your choice anyways. CB also makes a great essay writing how-to book. I don’t really know what you’ve been through, your background, etc., so I can’t help you choose a topic. </p>

<p>If you go on the common app’s website, it’ll give you the essay options you have.</p>

<p>Straight out of a college admissions book, here’s the things you shouldn’t write about:</p>

<p>-your religion or lack thereof (unless the school is religious)
-your relationship with your BF/GF
-political views
-drugs
-Sex
-death (it’s generally too emotional. It can be done, it’s just difficult to do well.)
-how much you love yourself
-the importance of a college education
-your personal philosophy. Particularly if it deals with selfishness
-your SAT scores
-how much you like to party
-any topic that doesn’t appeal to you but that you think will appeal to an admissions officer
-anything that’ll make a reader blush or be embarrassed
-anything that will accidentally reveal you to be a poor college prospect
-big ideas (world peace, etc)
-Trendy topics (globalization, terrorism, etc.)
-anything that makes it sound like you’re only going to college to make a lot of money when you get out.
-Solitary pursuits
-how glad you are to be valedictorian, National Merit Finalist, etc.
-how much therapy has changed your life</p>

<p>Other tips include:

  1. Don’t repeat information from other parts of your app
  2. Avoid generalities
  3. Be humorous if you can, but be careful
  4. Maintain the proper tone (informal but not sloppy, witty but not childish, memorable without being outrageous)
  5. Write about something you care about
  6. Every story doesn’t need a moral
  7. Don’t apologize or explain</p>

<p>Thanks Rachel! :)</p>

<p>I still need more ideas! Help?</p>

<p><a href=“http://collegeapps.about.com/od/essays/College_Admissions_Essays_Samples_Critiques_and_Writing_Tips.htm[/URL]”>http://collegeapps.about.com/od/essays/College_Admissions_Essays_Samples_Critiques_and_Writing_Tips.htm&lt;/a&gt;
<a href=“http://apply.jhu.edu/apply/essays.html[/URL]”>http://apply.jhu.edu/apply/essays.html&lt;/a&gt;
<a href=“http://www.conncoll.edu/admission/essays-that-worked.htm[/URL]”>http://www.conncoll.edu/admission/essays-that-worked.htm&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>Just a few things found on google =)</p>

<p>I’ve always heard never to write about a sports injury and how you have overcome the injury. Too common.</p>