<p>Would a reputed and experienced member of this forum please read my Personal Statement and tell me how it is? :) Thank you!</p>
<p>I’ll be more than happy to take a look. pm me.</p>
<p>I’m going to UCI / UCD and I was wondering if someone can read my personal statement and tell me what you think / be critical about it! my email is andrew.ludwig91 @ gmail . com the spaces are so that my email isn’t ********* anyways. email me and ill send you my personal statement. thanks 
I’ll give you more information about major, etc. when i email you my statement.</p>