Personal Triumph MIT essay, someone read?

PM me if interested in reading my essay for choice A of the MIT essays! Is a personal essay, and would prefer feedback other than “yea that’s good” or “dude that sucks” haha.

Bad idea to do this, FYI. Get people you trust to read - teachers, mentors, maybe parents. This is not a legitimate use of College Confidential. Common sense people…

@RoadTriptoCollege2017 I can look at it, although I am in no way an expert in admissions essays (I am a recent MIT alum), so I don’t know how useful my feedback would be.

If you haven’t already, you can also try posting in the “College Essays” subforum – you may get more responses there.