Phillips andover essay

<p>HI GUYS, JUST FINISHED MY PA ESSAY AND NEED DESPERATE HELP!
I need someone to check it out! Can anyone HELP PLEASE?</p>

<p>I am also applying for Andover for the upcoming year, however, im applying for 11th grade
AND I REALLY WANT TO FREAKIN GET IT
Overtime, I have developed an serious scary obsession of Phillips academy andover:
its on my phones wallpaper
its on my laptops wallpaper
its all over my fb account
its on my safari home page
its on my room door</p>

<p>It was supposed to be my ONLY choice but my parents FORCED me to apply to other schools, also I just finished my essay and I HAVE TO HAVE SOMEONE SEE IT to tell me how it is, CAN ANYONE HELP?
SOS DESPERATE HELP NEEDED. Thanks</p>

<p>btw: I am a male 16 years TOMORROW (01/13) i know its bad luck but what can I do?
I am arabic and I live in Tunisia, just moved 3 or 4 years ago, used to live in Lebanon but I had to leave bcz of the war. Now I am in the french system and I hate it. I WANT PA</p>