<p>I should have been more specific. I don’t need help with grammar. Yes, feedback was what I was looking for. In addition to wanting feedback about my discussion on research, I mostly need help regarding this one section where I discuss how a family illness affected my studies, and I felt pressured to graduate early and miss some important physics electives classes. </p>
<p>I thought that a physics professor would be better able to help with this than friends or the writing center. Plus, since I already graduated, its an hour drive to the writing center</p>