<p>plz help on my essay.</p>
<p>there are many problems (i think):
-grammar
-too much storyline, not enough emphasis on myself
-not focused enough, reaches everywhere
-crappy organization</p>
<p>if you could plz read and critique and fix anything, plz PM me.</p>
<p>help appreciated</p>
<p>thnx in advance :)</p>
<p>anyone? lol christmas time is here..... :(</p>
<p>IM DOING APPLICATION ESSAYS ON CHRISTMAS AND CHRISTMAS EVE. somoen PLZ HELP LOL</p>
<p>I thought the Pitzer supplement didn't have an essay?</p>
<p>um im on the common app and its under the (NONEXEMPT Section)</p>
<p>are u applying there this year?</p>
<p>Yes most likely- Im exempt though. But I still have to finish the "educational objectives" part!</p>
<p>yeah the educational objectives = the essay right?</p>
<p>I will critique yours if you are willing to return the favor.</p>
<p>PM me</p>
<p>Oh I get what you are talking about! My response to that isn't very essay-like; it's pretty straightforward.
Good luck with it!</p>
<p>oh it was 5000 characters so i assumed it was an essay response.</p>
<p>UGH man are you applying for any special programs or just reuglar decision?</p>
<p>pitzer is killing me -_-</p>
<p>anyone plz help me. ill try to return the favor too</p>
<p>anyone else wanna help?</p>
<p>sure denny...pmee it</p>
<p>any more readers?</p>
<p>yeah ill read it over for you</p>
<p>u still not finished?</p>
<p>i thought i was finished with the one i sent yuo but apparently that one was super messed up. so im doing one last fix, which was ur edit ivyboudn</p>
<p>kk... i like ur old essay better</p>
<p>Would it hurt my application a lot if my Common App essay is good but my supplement essay isn't great?</p>
<p>is ur supplement essay still good?</p>
<p>Not really. Mind looking at it?</p>