please brutalize me...

<p>or rather, my essay. I really want some honest and constructive criticism. Thanks!</p>

<p>e-mail it to me at <a href="mailto:girlspanky@windowslive.com">girlspanky@windowslive.com</a> will be an honest critique :D</p>

<p>omega007, are you a current year applicant?</p>