<p>Hi</p>
<p>I am looking for anyone who can help chop about 100 - 150 words off of my personal application essay!</p>
<p>I have 849 words so far on what I believe to be a pretty solid essay, but most of the colleges I am applying to only want around 700 and under... one wants 500!</p>
<p>So if anyone can help get rid of some unneeded words, I would really appreciate it!!</p>
<p>In addition to that, I really need help with some of my verb tenses... it gets mucky towards the end of my essay.</p>
<p>Again, thanks to anyone who will help! If you want I will PM you the topic, but it will take up 2 message spaces. If you want me to email it to you, either leave your email here or pm me it</p>
<p>Thanks again!!</p>
<p>I would be honored to shred your essay to pieces :) gives me something to do haha</p>
<p>just sent it to you =]</p>
<p>PM it and I will try to be as brutal as I can.</p>
<p>just emailed it to you, lookbeyond =]</p>
<p>thanks</p>
<p>My essay is now down to 709 words and I am currently making content revisions, would any additional people like read and give honest suggestions to how I may shorten the essay or revise it further?</p>
<p>Thanks :-D</p>
<p>hi. pm me or email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="not%20an%2009-er">/email</a></p>
<p>I'll edit it if you want, but I'm usually good at editing overall details, ideas, etc in essays- I'm not sure if I'm as good in cutting down words/sentences though. Also, I am 09, so if you don't feel comfortable with an 09er reading it, then don't send it.</p>
<p>bring up my post, i'll send it to you iwasjust</p>
<p>I just need one more readthrough... anyone?? please</p>