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<p>Q:Share an experience from your high school years through which you have gained respect for intellectual, social, or cultural differences.</p>

<p>Coming to the USA was a cultural shock to me. Everything from the food, the school system, the life style were totally different to me. I did not find it hard for me to adapt myself to the American culture but on the other hand I did not let my new adaptation change me totally because I also shared my different and unique culture with the people that I came in contact with. During the time that I spent in the ESL program, I met many students with different background. My ESL class was composed of all Hispanic students with different country of origin. However I found out that most of them did not know about each other’s culture. I also met people that came from countries that I was not aware of. Sometimes I felt like was in some type of worldwide event because I was surrounded by smart, bilingual, multiracial people that I think that I would have never met if I had not came to the USA. I see myself as being flexible but not breakable because I was able to adapt myself to a new culture by learning from theirs and by also transmitting my own.</p>

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<p>I don’t think it answers the prompt correctly: Since it asks about an experience I think you should based your answer in one day specifically-one in which you found out about the ESL class. For example you can talk about the first day you were enrolled in such classes, who you met. Also I didn’t see how did you gained “respect” through this experience. One website I always recommend for this type of issues-about essays-is <a href=“http://www.essayforum.com;%5B/url%5D”>www.essayforum.com;</a> it is incredible and the people there help a lot. Try it and good luck.</p>

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