<p>Phew!!! Don’t you think it could be better if you could trim down some stuffs. It’s more of laundry list than of passions. Didn’t I mentioned earlier that you should explain the value of your awards? It’s hard to judge what’s the value of that Gold Medal without a brief explanation.
Do you think Dartmouth is gonna give you full aid despite those relatively low scores (compared to students with brutal competition from China and India). </p>
<p>But still, you have good chances.</p>
<p>Post this in “What are my chances” forum. That would be better.</p>