Please chance me and give me suggestions

Well I am applying Colgate for ED1 and Gettysburg for ED2
My progress is as mentioned below
top 40% in class 9 and 10
top 60% in Alevel internal exams
top 15% in mid year
top 10% in finals
(In the top school of nation, from where placement to Ivy league and top notch college is common)
3A* 2A 1C in A levels final
Sat 2010- ( Maths-750, Cr-610)
Initiated and successfully conducted environment campaign on Annapurna Base camp, with help of ministry and government
Recipient of 500 dollar scholarship by wilderness project, held worldwide
Participated at environment seminar conducted by Samsung South Korea, after being chosen and sponsored by Samsung
Environment campaign and awareness program at various community and school
Forth place in international environment essay competition
Second place in national level robotics competition
Youth reporter on environment issues for Nepal
Published numerous article regarding local environment
and many more…
Recommendations-great
Essay- focused on how I think different than others

Are you full pay, or do you need financial aid? Is this next year when you plan to apply (since you would have heard back from Colgate by now for this year)?

I am from Nepal and I need a huge amount of financial aid and I am planning to apply for next year.