Here is what my application will likely look like
Political science and Jewish studies major
SAT CR:640:( M:730 W:700 (2070) will try to retake in November, is it necessary?
ACT 31C: (35E, 31M, 31R, 27S uggh:()
SAT iis: 710 USH taking Math1
GPA 4.0 out 4.0 UW, 4.25 W
AP tests: 5 Eng Lang, 5 USH, 4 Euro, next year will take Comp gov, Spanish, Macro, Stat
Academic awards: not really given at my school, but in ninth grade I got awards in math, English, science, and social studies (9th grade middle school awards) APUSH class MVP
School: Competitive school district in PA
Ethnicity: White
Income: top
ECs: president of NHS, president of Jewish Culture Club, captain of relay for life team, oboe/English horn, marching band, foreign affairs club, intern at state rep’s office
Recs (they should be very solid): APUSH, APLang, Summer teacher from Oxford University, state rep, guidance counselor
Summers: internship at rep, studied International law in Oxford, summer of 2013 my mother had ovarian cancer:(
Misc: I am a very enthusiastic student and that should be evident within my essays, I’m extremely motivated (I am a work horse) and passionate
Emory ED1
Brandeis maybe ED2
Colgate maybe ED2
UCLA
Bates
American
Bowdoin maybe
Thanks for the feedback