PLEASE CRITIQUE - Dear Roomate Essay

<p>I need to send this thing out by today (monday) so please read it to help me in editing it and shortening it so it will fit in the text box. Not to discriminate, but please do not be a prospective student looking to gain ideas. I will appreciate the help of good writers who are already matriculated at Stanford or have already finalized their essays.</p>

<p>ill help you out</p>

<p>I'll read........</p>

<p>I'll comment (if I get time tonight between giving and getting candy :P)</p>

<p>i'll read it :)</p>

<p>where's the essay?</p>

<p>sorry princess, i dont post it for the world to see</p>

<p>Ill read it</p>

<p>ok, pm me the essay then</p>