Please Critique my Almost Portfolio~

<p>Hello everyone! I've been searching around on the site thus far and it appears that I will need some constructive criticism if my portfolio is going to get anywhere.</p>

<p>So.. I would really appreciate it if ya'll would just take a quick look and tell me what you think.</p>

<p>Oh and I'm planning to try to get into FIT or Parsons for Fashion Design, and if I can't then I could try for an art and academic scholarship at scad. </p>

<p>Progress</a> Portfolio - a set on Flickr</p>

<p>It would be best to see some of them full-sized I might add on.</p>