Please critique my Common App essay

<p>Would anybody be willing to read my Common App essay and give me feedback? I don't want to post it here, so I'll pm it to you if you respond. The essay prompt is "Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?"
Thanks!</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>I can read it!</p>

<p>Sure, I can read it. I’m no pro, but I’m an ace English Literature and Language student and I’m applying for the second time to schools cause I took a gap. Also I got great feedback on my essays. In case you’re wondering, I submitted my application already for Early Action so nothing to worry about.</p>