Please critique my Common App Essay!!

Transfer Students
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<p>I'm applying to BU, Binghamton, and Northeastern. </p>

<p>If anyone is interested, please message me and I will send you the essay.</p>

<p>Thanks!!</p>

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<p>I’ll critique yours if you critique mine</p>

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<li>yeah sure</li>
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