<p>Hey parents, I've finally been able to write my essay and was wondering if anyone of you could take a look and critique it. I am skeptical about having other applicants read it just incase they might steal the idea. PM Me if you are willing to take a look. Thanks, I greatly appreciate it and respect all the help you give on the boards.</p>
<p>Bump - Plz thanks</p>
<p>I can look at it and would be happy to, but can't promise it will be before the weekend.</p>
<p>Ditto from me--I'd be happy to look at it but can't promise to get it back to you before Monday.</p>
<p>I'm an English teacher/parent. I'll give you an honest opinion.</p>
<p>I will help you out...send it on.... : )</p>
<p>I've PMed to you all, but haven't received a response yet, although I know some of you have told me I won't get a response until after Monday. I'm just checking to make sure it actually got sent. Thanks - if anyone else would like to take a look please feel free to let me know. I appreciate it!</p>
<p>I didn't receive the pm with the essay. Please try again.</p>
<p>parikhs,
I tried to send you my comments, but can't because your mailbox is full. Please clear it.</p>
<p>Hey Clayleas..sorry about that - its cleared - please send it over :). Anybody else? PM ME or post here and i'll pm you it.</p>
<p>ill read it</p>
<p>I've decided to write about a completely different topic that reveals more of my personality / accomplishments - when its done I'll PM you all it.</p>