<p>Hey, I was wondering if y'all would mind giving me some suggestions on my essay? My mom and grandma both liked it, but we all know how unreliable they are for honest feedback. Thanks :)</p>
<p>I'll read it</p>
<p>Hey, I was wondering if y'all would mind giving me some suggestions on my essay? My mom and grandma both liked it, but we all know how unreliable they are for honest feedback. Thanks :)</p>
<p>I'll read it</p>