Please critique my NYU supplement

College Essays
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<p>Please critique my NYU supplement. I need some external wisdom.
The only 2014ers I will send it to are NYU EDers though.
Just let me know and I'll PM it over.</p>

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<p>I’ll look over it, certainly.</p>

<p>Please note that I am not applying to NYU, and am most certainly not interested.</p>

<p>PM me :P</p>

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<p>I’ll see it. :]</p>

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<p>i got accepted to Yale already and will not be applying to NYU
send it over :)</p>

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<p>Im not applying to nyu, id be interested to look at it…pm me!</p>