Please critique my personal statement! Nov 1 Deadline!!!

<p>I am desperate to have someone read over my common app essay. Please pm me if you have experience editing and would be willing to help me. I have a November 1st deadline and would like to submit my app this weekend. Please help!!!</p>

<p>read yours if you read mine?</p>

<p>sure i’ll read over anyone’s!</p>

<p>anyone?? will gladly read yours!</p>

<p>pm m if you will. thanks.</p>

<p>ill read yours if you read mine!</p>