Please critique my short answer?

College Essays
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<p>And be as harsh as you can :)</p>

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<p>Which short answer are you referring to? :P</p>

3

<p>common app short answer :)</p>

<p>Anyone??</p>

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<p>bumppp…anyone?</p>

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<p>anyone? :slight_smile: It’s barely 1000 characters…</p>

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<p>i’ll read it!</p>